I have read your first draft. I found some common mistakes in some of your works.

:?: Some of you missing the opening statment of the aim or goal of your recipe

:?: Some of you did not list the materials in order of use

:?: Some of you forget to use imperative to indicate commands

I have told you all the structure and language features of procedural text in the previous lesson. I think you should refer to some recipes or procedural texts to recall your memory of how to write procedural texts. I will give the first draft to you tomorrow and talk those mistakes again. Make sure you understand the above three points and know how to correct it and write your final recipe.